Chapter One…

I collect my thoughts and continue to focus upon the task ahead; I search for the light that marks my escape. As the glimmer of light turns into a beacon, I stand up and exit my solitude and I am ready to face my fears.  As I step outside of the cave I realize that it is dusk; the moon is full and the air is crisp.  I look around and try to get hold of my bearings; I am high atop the Golbotros Mountains and I can see King Mords castle in the distance.  King Mord is large despicable man with dark features whose name invokes fear in all beings of moral standings.  For centuries his family boded evil and continue to threaten all of mankind; it is this curse that I can not escape. His empire stands as an ominous fortress built atop of the Golbotros Mountains for all men to see; these are the same mountains that I gazed upon from my home in Nicosta.  The Golbotros Mountains separated my home from the rest of the world. They are the same mountains that I was told never to climb.  Now, I embrace them; for they are an escape from the village that I would never be able to return to.

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12 thoughts on “Chapter One…

  1. I love the way you describe the setting. It gives the reader a real sense of the atmosphere in which the character is in. You can actually imagine being in this place as you read the story. Keep the posts coming, great story so far!

  2. Need to keep reading…..wish your posts were more frequent! Can’t wait to see what happens next! Loving this story so far, your doing a great job!

  3. I can picture Robert standing outside peering out towards the mountains. You really have written this so well that I feel a real connection to the character. Keep posting !!

  4. You are an artist with your words. You have a beautiful way of connecting your reader with the surroundings and starting a relationship with the character. You leave us wanting more!! Keep them coming!!

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